Thursday, 14 January 2010

Audience Feedback On Pitches

Name Of Group And Task Idea
Luke and Abbi - Film Opening

Genre
Horror/Thriller

Target Audience
15+

Other Texts It Reminds You Of
Scream, Saw, The Ring, Kiss The Girls

Potential Problems
  • Too much work
  • Pictures
  • Could be quite scary for 15 year olds
  • Quite technical
  • Not much happening may get boring
  • The locations may not be appropriate - garage works best
  • Offensive
  • Who's perspective are we seeing it through?
  • Lighting - Is it night?
  • Mise en scene - Convincing location
  • Could be a short movie

Positive Comments

  • Really know what we're doing
  • Good storyline
  • Good ideas
  • Very good pitch - nice consideration of costume and location
  • I like thrillers
  • Makes me want to watch the rest
  • As it's similar to Saw, it could be quite hooking
  • Good planning
  • Really inventive and well thought out ideas, good setting and sinister ideas
  • Good idea to be like Saw because it could bring Saw fans to watch it

Advice/Suggestions

  • Keep it simple
  • Garage would be best for setting - dark, cold and gloomy
  • Don't complicate things too much
  • Look at other thriller movies for more ideas
  • Look into music which helps enhance the genre
  • Research effective camera shots
  • Build tension
  • Don't reveal the kidnapper
  • Flashbacks to abduction

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